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Sherlock?" You asked, watching the detective fix the coat on the young curly haired boy.

"What?" He smiled over at you.

"Where are you taking Hamish?"

His smile grew a little bit as did your sons.

His smile was crooked, much like his fathers. He was the spitting image of him and was already showing his intelligence at such a young age. His hair curled and bounced at the top of his head while his eyes shimmered a bright (e/c).

"Dad's taking me to see a crime scene!" Hamish blurted out excitedly.

"What? Oh no, you are not going to a crime scene." You frowned, lifting the small child up into your arms.

"It's not going to be that bad, (Y/N). Just one of the suicides that have been taken place recently." Sherlock explained.

"That's even worse!" You turned away from him.

You thudded your way upstairs towards Hamish's bedroom.

"Mum! Let me go! Dad promised that he would take me to see a real crime scene!" He whined and squirmed but you wouldn't budge.

"When I say no Hamish I mean no."

You could hear Sherlock's footsteps follow you up the stairs and into Hamish's bedroom. You placed your son down on the ground.

"You can come with us." Sherlock suggested in your ear.

You spun on your heel to face him, your eyebrow raised. "What?"

"Come with us," Sherlock pleaded, taking your hands into his. "It's been a while since you've come with me to a crime scene. It could be like a family outing."

You laughed. "Family outing? Really? Normal family's go and spend the day at the zoo or the park or the cinema-"

"Does it really look as if our family is normal? Your boyfriend is sociopath and your son is highly intelligent for his age."

He began to entwine his gloved fingers into yours.

"Please, (Y/N), just come with us."

You sighed and rolled your eyes. "Fine, I'll come with you, but if anything happens; I will kill you."

Hamish wrapped his arms around your leg and smiled gleefully.

- - - - - -

"Sherlock, you can't bring him in with you. He's just a kid!" Lestrade protested as he stood on the opposite side of the yellow police tape.

Sherlock merely rolled his eyes at him as he held Hamish in his arms. You stood closely behind him, smiling smugly to yourself.

"I told you he wouldn't let you." You sang.

Sherlock ignored your taunting and Lestrade's words and stepped underneath the police tape, holding it open for you to pass under.

You followed him into the building, passing police officers, forensics and the occasional detective.

He set Hamish down onto the floor and proceeded to look over the body that was lying in the middle of the floor. You held onto his shoulders to force him not to follow his father.

You watched Sherlock's every move; from the way he touched the deceased body's coat to the way he check the man's hair.

It was always wonderful, watching him make deductions. You had to admit; you missed this.

Running off to a crime scene to inspect something and listening to Sherlock's deductions while he made everyone else in the room feel stupid.

"Hamish," He beckoned for his son.

Hamish wriggled out of your hand and raced over to his face, his doe eyes staring up at the man in admiration.

He pointed towards the body on the floor. "What do you think?"

The young boy turned to face the body. He knelt down beside it, feeling the jacket with his small fingers and inspecting the body's hand along with his hair.

"His jacket and hair is wet, but it wasn't raining today.." He spoke quietly.

Sherlock nodded along with him, biting his lip to hold back his smile.

"But..but it was raining in Cardiff today!" He said triumphantly, jumping up from the ground. "That's right, isn't it?"

He nodded his head once again and allowed his son to continue with his small deduction that he had made.

"But..he's not dressed for bus-busi.."

"Business." You corrected him with a smile.

"Yeah, that!"

Sherlock rubbed his hair and smiled down at him, pride seeping through his eyes. You could not help but smile at the scene before you.

Hamish continued with his deduction, correcting his words every so often, while Sherlock stood back and watched him spiral words and making the officers feel like complete idiots as someone as young as him could easily spot the things that they had missed so easily.

Sherlock lifted him into his arms once more, smiling proudly.

"Is that the reason you bloody brought him here?" Lestrade asked, folding his arms across his chest and frowning at them.

"Yes, yes it was."
Since so many people were asking for a part 2, here you go! 

Hamish is around seven or eight at the time
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RoseMaylieGottschalk Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
>///<
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snowyloki1313 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Awww that was so cute!!
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PandaExperience Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! 
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artisticwolfgirl14 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I DIED
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cytez-kaimee Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2014
omg, sherly brought mini john (aka hamish) along to show off his kid???? wow. just wow.
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Insanitylover213 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Is there going to be a part 3? 
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PandaExperience Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No, sorry
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Insanitylover213 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Awww
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Insanitylover213 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Omg that is so cute I LOVE THIS WITH ALL MY HEART 
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Jellybaby2003 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is sooooooo cute!!!😄 btw isn't  johns middle name hamish? 
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PandaExperience Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, yes it is. 
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Sakura19912 Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Awww lol
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zKariLuna Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
awww, lol, its like the adams family..XD only much more awesome on another level! XD yay! love this hamish is awesome!
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PandaExperience Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It really is xD 
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Superstar972 Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Just a normal Holmes family sunday trip to a crime scene,no biggy! XD
-Loved the story and the name Hamish is soo cute :3 . Can you make a part 3,or did you alredy made it and I'm blind? :P
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PandaExperience Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :3 
I've not made a part 3 and I wasn't really planning to, sorry. 
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Superstar972 Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome(I first spelled it wlelcomee XD)
It's ok,but again, <3 it !
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gabbypicca Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014
You need to keep going and have everybody else to and them finding out he to Hamish to see a dead body 
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KingofHearts709 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Student Writer
My Hamish making deductions. I'm so proud. C: -BB
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leonswife Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014
So adorable Hamish is. Awesome work. :)
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PandaExperience Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :3 
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Rosebud278 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Student Writer
Gah! I love this!!!!!! XD
Hamish making adults feeling stupid :iconsocuteplz:
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PandaExperience Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :3 

Hamish is just like his father isn't he? 
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FlyingTigerr Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
Wait, wait! Isn't this the episode of... Study In Pink? And awwwh, Hamish is such an adorable name. (...so happy it's reader-chan and Sherlock's kid, not Irene's...)

Oh my gosh, I was hoping for Anderson or Donovan to arrive at the crime scene, assuming it is the first episode of series 1, and Donovan would be like "Freak Family's here..." and blah blah blah, and then Hamish would go up to Anderson and Donovan, "did she scrub your floors?" in an innocent voice.

And Hamish would stare at : RACH and go to his father and ask  "Who's Rachel?" and Anderson would say "It's RACH, german word for revenge--" but then Reader-chan would close the door on him x3
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artisticwolfgirl14 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
DID SHE SCRUB YOUR FLOORS............. I DIED
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PandaExperience Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
A little bit yeah - I couldn't think of anything else to put for this. I really do like Hamish a lot (I would honestly name my child Hamish if I could). 

That would have been so cute! Hamish is just so innocent but he just knows that he's talking about. 

x3 If I write another once like this, I'll make sure to include that in it. 
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FlyingTigerr Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
Maybe I wouldn't name my child that... most likely a middle name. Yeaaah.

Oh my gosh, I know x3

Yaaay~! That'd be so adorable!
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the time spent with Sherlock it wouldn't surprise me if he did take our kid to a crime scene :iconsweatplz:
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PandaExperience Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It wouldn't be xD 
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Naelianne Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
Forget amusement parks and zoos, who needs them anyway when you got a crime scene two blocks away? Quiet sunday walks are for common goldfishes xD
That was just, sooooo cute!
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PandaExperience Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Normal families are so boring aren't they? XD 
Thank you! 
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Naelianne Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
You bet they are! But unfortunately, that's the most common, and there's only one Lestrade to let (reluctantly but still) a kid access to a crime scene xD
You're welcome. ^^
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PandaExperience Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
But we all love Lestrade no matter what xD 
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Naelianne Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014
Indeed we do ^^
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JenLovesShenny Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
that's so sweet
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PandaExperience Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :3 
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iced-ninja Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
GAH! So cute and fluffeh!
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PandaExperience Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! >.< 
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iced-ninja Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem. For once, I didn't push this one.
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